Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Sestina Poems..

My sestina poem..

The Concord Art Association Regrets                  By: Pam White 

Your entry was not accepted. We regret
it wasn't (enough for us), a work of love.
We liked many of the colors on the whole
but the mass was just something unrelated
to the rest of our show. We hope your work
will have a bright future in another place.

We remember last year you tried to place
another photograph and it was also with regret
we turned you down. Though for that particular work
we found nothing about it (no one could) to love.
It was obscure and a little upsetting in relation
to the rest of our show which we look on as a whole.

Now you may think us ungenerous. On the whole
you are probably right, but this is our place
and we can do what we want whether you relate
to it or not. However we don't want you to regret
your association with us. We want you to love
us, send us money, but please, no more work.

You see right now we need money to work
on the building we're in. There's a hole
in the roof and one wall needs all the love
and attention it can get. Really the place
needs so much, which all costs. I regret
to remind you we need more space for related

works. We're trying to expand and relate
to lots of different kinds of work
so different people won't regret
their visit with us but will see the whole
beauty and tranquility of the place
and come with us, a journey of love

where people of all races, colors, and creeds love
to look and bask and of course bring relations,
friends, and lovers. All are welcome to our place
here where all the world's magnificent work
can be shown in its entirety, the whole
place filled - with your exception, we regret.

We know you'll love the whole
work we're doing for this place.
We can't relate enough our regret.




Nicole's sestina poem..

Sestina By: Elizabeth Bishop

September rain falls on the house.
In the failing light, the old grandmother
sits in the kitchen with the child
beside the Little Marvel Stove,
reading the jokes from the almanac,
laughing and talking to hide her tears.

She thinks that her equinoctial tears
and the rain that beats on the roof of the house
were both foretold by the almanac,
but only known to a grandmother.
The iron kettle sings on the stove.
She cuts some bread and says to the child,

It's time for tea now; but the child
is watching the teakettle's small hard tears
dance like mad on the hot black stove,
the way the rain must dance on the house.
Tidying up, the old grandmother
hangs up the clever almanac

on its string. Birdlike, the almanac
hovers half open above the child,
hovers above the old grandmother
and her teacup full of dark brown tears.
She shivers and says she thinks the house
feels chilly, and puts more wood in the stove.

It was to be, says the Marvel Stove.
I know what I know, says the almanac.
With crayons the child draws a rigid house
and a winding pathway. Then the child
puts in a man with buttons like tears
and shows it proudly to the grandmother.

But secretly, while the grandmother
busies herself about the stove,
the little moons fall down like tears
from between the pages of the almanac
into the flower bed the child
has carefully placed in the front of the house.

Time to plant tears, says the almanac.
The grandmother sings to the marvelous stove
and the child draws another inscrutable house.

Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Holden's "Health Issues"..

In chapter 20, Holden pretends that he has two health issues:
  1. When he's drunk he has a "bullet in his gut" and he pretends that it's bleeding, so he holds his stomach in the bar, like he's bleeding
  2. He pretends that he has pneumonia, saying like he felt like he was going to die
I believe he behaves this way because he's absolutely crazy. He seems like he's not mentally stable to be outside where everyone else is.
Also, he does this because he wants people to feel for him and care for him.

He says that he wants to have all his guts pour out because he's been holding all of his emotions inside and he finally just wants them to pour out.
Him having pneumonia would affect his lungs really bag and his breathing, that sort of connects with Allie with his asthma and how he died.

Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Luce's faults..

Holden says a lot of things that bother him against Luce. Even though Luce is a pain in the ass towards Holden, he still doesn't really want him to go. It seems like Holden can still talk to Luce really easily about anything, and that he's comfortable around him. It seems like Luce is the only non-phony person around Holden, and Holden accepts him for having such a good vocabulary and being intellectual. I guess Holden likes having Luce around, because he thinks everyone else is simply phony.

Friday, November 21, 2008

Holden and Mercutio..

I think that Holden identifies with Mercutio and not Tybalt because they're similar. In Romeo and Juliet, Mercutio doesn't like when people are flashy with their money and luxuries. He doesn't like how people are into the latest fashion. Even though Holden is a wealthy boy and comes from a wealthy home, he feels the same way as Mercutio. Holden calls a lot of people "phony" and when people show off their things, he calls them "phony".

Tuesday, November 18, 2008

Conversation with Horowitz..

The conversation with Horowitz and Holden is very random in the taxi cab. It's like Holden really can't think of anything else to say, so he says the first thing that comes to his head. Also, it's because Holden is kind of crazy that makes him weird with what he says, or what he thinks of. 

Differences between Holden and Horowitz
  • Horowitz is more impatient
  • Holden is calm and wants to talk with Horowitz
  • Horowitz seems like he doesn't want to talk
  • Horowitz is an older man
  • Holden is young
  • Holden enjoys going out for a drink
  • Horowitz doesn't and can't since he's a cab driver
  • Horowitz is a very touchy guy

Allie's Poetry Assignment..

My Acrostic:

Drowning out all my surroundings

Into a place where everything’s calm

Serenity replaces the stressful days

Creating a more peaceful place for me to relax

 

My Haiku:

Problems go away,

As soon as I hear a song.

Secret get a away

 

 

Two author’s poems:

  • Rain by Shel Silverstein

I opened my eyes

And looked up at the rain,

And it dripped in my head

And flowed into my brain,

And all that I hear as I lie in my bed

Is the slishity-slosh of the rain in my head.

 

I step very softly,

I walk very slow,

I can't do a handstand--

I might overflow,

So pardon the wild crazy thing I just said--

I'm just not the same since there's rain in my head.

 

  • Kissass by Allen Ginsberg

Kissass is the Part of Peace

America will have to Kissass Mother Earth

Whites have to Kissass Blacks, for Peace & Pleasure,

Only Pathway to Peace, Kissass.

Holden's conversation on the Train..

Dear Ernest,

                        So, I talked to Rudolf yesterday, and he told me so much stuff about Pencey and you! I really thought his name was something else, but I guess not.  I was very surprised with all the things he told me, actually. You never told me that you were voted class president Ernest! You have to tell me everything about it, and why you wanted to be class president. Oh, and poor, poor Rudolf has a minor brain tumor?! You never told me this sad news, we should do something for him; maybe donate money to help him pay for the expenses of the operation. You know, you and all your “popular” friends could help out too for Rudolf.  He seemed like a nice guy, but something was really weird about the conversation. Ernest, I can’t believe you never told me any of this! There’s so much stuff we have to catch up on, and so much stuff we have to do! Well, hopefully we’ll see each other very soon to get started. Call me sometime so you can tell me everything else I don’t know about Pencey and all your friends!

            Love always,

Mom

Quotation, Catcher in the Rye..

Through pages 1-16, the quotation that I chose was, "I like to be somewhere at least where you can see a few girls around once in a while, even if they're only scratching their arms or blowing their noses or even just giggling or something." I chose this quote because I thought it was really cute of the main character to say that. It seems like he just likes having a girl in his presence, no matter what she's doing. 

For this quotation, the question for my classmates to answer is, particularly for the boys, is:
-Do you usually like having a girl around you, alone or with a group like the main character says? What's the difference between having a girl near you, rather then not having one near you?

Phony..

To be phony can mean to be fake, or to pretend to be something you're really not. Mostly people can be phony. Adults are better at being phony than children because they want to try to impress other people more than we do. Experience: My brother brought home his girlfriend one time, and it was the first time introducing her to my family. He would always talk about her and tell us how nice, talkative, and how great she was; before we met her. When she finally came over, and we met her and talked to her, we realized how clingy, and annoying she was. First impressions mean a lot, but I don't judge people the first time I meet them. But with her, it was totally different.

Scars..

Human History: David becomes a history teacher in Rochester, Minnesota. He says he doesn't "believe in the purity and certainty of the study of history over law." He says he finds history endlessly amusing, know what he knows about religion and sexual abuse. He feels like he's free to "..augment them with whatever lurid or comical fantasy my imagination might concoct." 

His relationship with his wife: David's wife, Betsy, also is a teacher like David. She asked David if he wanted to go back to Montana, his childhood. He told her him, nor anyone in his immediate family would want to go back to Montana. He told her what happened in Montana with their family, and she was stunned but fascinated. He knew that no one ever spoke of that summer in Montana, hasn't since it happened. They all keep it a subject they never discuss. He didn't tell his wife that, because he said "..i wanted to see what would happen when someone else brought out into the open a topic that had never been discussed in any detail in my presence. 

What happens to Frank..

After Frank commits suicide, a lot of the problems that the Hayden family had when the issue was going on, disappears. Wes tells David that he believes that if someone does wrong, they eventually pay for what they did. "But that doesn't mean the sun's going to sine."-Wesley. Also, he talks about a story for when they were younger, and he says, "My brother. Being in the one place in the world I needed him most.." It was kind of sad because he talks about how that time he really needed him, but now how Frank did wrong, and now he's dead.